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Realism Practice

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Any advice? <3
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Overall it's a really great picture, but like all things it needs a bit of improvement. Mainly the shine over the eye, you made it look like it's being stretched. Just one tiny nitpick, but some of the lashes appear in random places. The eye itself and the line of the top and bottom of the eye, look like they are fused together. Personally my suggestion to help that is to add a bit of pink to it. Anyway this is still really amazing, keep up the awesome work. (If you look up a picture of an eye it could help) <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/>